Chelsey and Ollie Journey Through College

Overall, I think this video achieves its purpose, which is to show a journey through college. What I like most is that there is a range of different shots showing Chelsey walking though college. These clearly illustrate her journey through college and show her surroundings. For the most part the different shots flow into each other quite well, but there is a few that are a bit harsher and cut quite abruptly and could disorient the viewer. I did try to remove these, but they were necessary in the overall video outcome.

The main problem with this video is that it is too long. This is a problem for a few reasons. Firstly, it drags a bit and the viewer could easily get bored. The second key problem is that when looking for music too add to it, there was none long enough for the whole video. This prevented me from therefore adding music and making the video more interested and appealing. Something else which I thought was a good idea at the time is the zooming in and out during the filming, This ended up giving a blurred look in a few places and wobbling the camera.

In terms of this video relating to my previous storyboard it links strongly and I constantly referred to it. The only major difference is that there is a bit missing from the video that is in the storyboard. I did not include this as it was not a key section and I wanted to shorten the video a bit.

If I was to redo this I would not change the idea but I would shorten it so that Chelsey would start walking from a classroom instead of going straight across college.