Bad Journey Remake

This was meant to be a remake of my journey through college had quite a few problems. However, for a few reasons this turned out really bad, worse than the first one.
The problems with the first one were that it was primarily too long, making it boring and long winded for the viewer. Then I zoomed quite a bit and moved the camera in general which isn't what was meant and disoriented the video.
The aim for this video was to correct these problems and show improvements and a new storyline where Yasmin was going to meet Lois at a table. However, a few problems made the whole video basically a mess. Firstly, I did not have a list of shots or a storyboard to work from so no plan and no previous checking of the shots. That was the first obstacle, then the camera died and I swapped to a different one disorientating me and I lost track of the shots. These all led to the overall bad result.